I think everything just turned our cool except the hand, seriously dude what's with the hands they didn't come out very right like they should have, ANy ways sorry for the criticism but dude its not looking so good becoz of the shades + the awkward hands. ANd there are Loops in Legs so i think you need to work on that too, but over all you did a good job regarding your time and effort you put in this artwork, so i'm just making this long as the critique should be minimun 100 characters, ^_^ still working on it yeah come on!
The only reason I'm giving you a 4 point for everything is because you're bocodamondo and you're cool(Emila and Sunny is great great grat great and great), and I can sympathize.
Originality: I've seen many GN parodies and this is the worst one I've seen. You only get 2 points for originality because GN has been seriously abused.
Vision: Weird Cloth Waves. Repetition. Would look better if they didn't wear shades. No BG. The only thing good is the art, and the art is ruined by the awkward shades. I get what you trying to do. 4.5 stars
Technique: Emila's animation is way f-cking more better than this.
Impact: I like good Gangnam Style parodies, but not this one. This one's bad.
This is better: ht tp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_tILqds7-jg
Just what the f-ck is worng with this! Cute Cosplay by you is infinitely better than this!
Well I get it because you rushed it in 8 hours. Try taking your time next time.
Why did you go so downhill! I seriously liked Emila and Sunny! > : (
ANy ways sorry for the criticism but dude its not looking so good becoz of the shades + the awkward hands.
ANd there are Loops in Legs so i think you need to work on that too, but over all you did a good job regarding your time and effort you put in this artwork, so i'm just making this long as the critique should be minimun 100 characters, ^_^ still working on it yeah come on!
Originality:
I've seen many GN parodies and this is the worst one I've seen. You only get 2 points for originality because GN has been seriously abused.
Vision:
Weird Cloth Waves.
Repetition.
Would look better if they didn't wear shades.
No BG.
The only thing good is the art, and the art is ruined by the awkward shades. I get what you trying to do. 4.5 stars
Technique:
Emila's animation is way f-cking more better than this.
Impact:
I like good Gangnam Style parodies, but not this one. This one's bad.
This is better:
ht tp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_tILqds7-jg
Just what the f-ck is worng with this! Cute Cosplay by you is infinitely better than this!
Well I get it because you rushed it in 8 hours. Try taking your time next time.
Why did you go so downhill! I seriously liked Emila and Sunny! > : (
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